Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, due to the increase of reasonable concerns in society about global warming, different opinions emerged and some suggest that, rather than prevention, it is better to adjust to living with
climate
imbalance. In my
opinion
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it is completely wrong, due to its slaughtering effect on inhabitant's life even with minor changes .
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of all, the
arguement
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of finding a way to live with
climate
change
,
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could only be claimed by those, who could not understand the destructive impacts of small changes in
globe's
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temperature . As many experts claimed, after the water level surge, so many cities would
expected
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to be swallowed by oceans.
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some people could not acknowledge
this
matter, all living creatures are collectively
under
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risk . Since the ice masses started to melt
long
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while ago,
this
era
seem
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to be so late for tiny resolutions. The bigger damaging factors,
such
as overuse of fossil fuels and waste methods other than recycling should have been
adressed
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so long ago by the governments. Considering the probable and close effects of
the
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climate
change, the only matter mankind may get used to is the new lifestyle, which is more friendly to the balance of
atmosphere
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This
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meaures
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measures
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can be exemplified by sun
pannels
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and wind turbines for producing energy and
developping
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developing

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sustainable recycling methods for wastes.
Although
there are some efforts for returning
this
destruction, obviously it is not enough. More powerful restrictions on humankind's dangerous actions
,
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should be implemented on
war
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footing, in order to
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our kind and other inhabitants of the whole world. In conclusion,
the
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climate
change is an upcoming disaster unless mankind would not
adress
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the issue effectively.
Therefore
, everyone should adjust to the measures
instead
of facing the irreversible effects of destroyed
climate
balance .
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