some people think that single sex schools perform better academically. others, however, beleive that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adults life. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
Part of
a
society Remove the article
apply
argue
that single-sex Change the verb form
argues
schools
provide a comprehensive education system to students and others assert that mixed schools
bestow more social values which is a useful skill for their adult lives. I strongly agree with the second
argument mentioned above and this
essay will analyze both views followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin
with, expose
to the opposite gender group gives Replace the word
exposure
experience
of Add an article
the experience
an experience
real-life
environment and practical knowledge to students from their childhood in mixed Add an article
the real-life
schools
. It also
helps to improve their relationship qualities. Consequently
, not only children learn to respect the other gender but also
, understand their mentality because it is known
fact that males and females have completely different characteristics, thinking Correct article usage
a known
pattern
and Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
behaviors
. Change the spelling
behaviours
As a result
, they will learn to maintain and protect their relationship throughout their Correct your spelling
lifetime
life time
school age onwards. Correct your spelling
lifetime
For instance
, a
recent research carried out by the University of Colombo with divorced individuals in Sri Lanka, showed that 73% of them, went to single-sex Remove the article
apply
schools
and have respective problems, domestic violence and verbal abuses.
Nevertheless
, single-sex schools
are academically more productive than mixed schools
due to less distraction since same gender share equal
rhythm of thinking may minimize conflicts among students. Add an article
the equal
Therefore
, pupil
can concentrate on their academic performances and achieve targets with minimum obstacles. Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
However
, these scholars have less humanity and poor soft skills such
as interpersonal skills, ethics and flexibility so on. This
problem may indirectly the reasons
for increasing rates of violence, crimes and rapes. Fix the agreement mistake
reason
For example
, 68% of prisoners in Brazil studied in same-sex schools
according to the Times magazine article.
To conclude, it is translucent that mixed schools
develop kids’ social skills require to their latter lives despite, the fact that single sex
Add a hyphen
single-sex
schools
produce more academic results. Contemporary
world needs Correct article usage
The contemporary
generation
with good humane than high profiles.Correct article usage
a generation
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