some people think that single sex schools perform better academically. others, however, beleive that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adults life. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

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society
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that single-sex
schools
provide a comprehensive education system to students and others assert that mixed
schools
bestow more social values which is a useful skill for their adult lives. I strongly agree with the
second
argument mentioned above and
this
essay will analyze both views followed by a reasoned conclusion.
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to the opposite gender group gives
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of
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environment and practical knowledge to students from their childhood in mixed
schools
. It
also
helps to improve their relationship qualities.
Consequently
, not only children learn to respect the other gender but
also
, understand their mentality because it is
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fact that males and females have completely different characteristics, thinking
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and
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.
As a result
, they will learn to maintain and protect their relationship throughout their
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life time
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school age onwards.
For instance
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recent research carried out by the University of Colombo with divorced individuals in Sri Lanka, showed that 73% of them, went to single-sex
schools
and have respective problems, domestic violence and verbal abuses.
Nevertheless
, single-sex
schools
are academically more productive than mixed
schools
due to less distraction since same gender share
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rhythm of thinking may minimize conflicts among students.
Therefore
,
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pupils
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can concentrate on their academic performances and achieve targets with minimum obstacles.
However
, these scholars have less humanity and poor soft skills
such
as interpersonal skills, ethics and flexibility so on.
This
problem may indirectly the
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for increasing rates of violence, crimes and rapes.
For example
, 68% of prisoners in Brazil studied in same-sex
schools
according to the Times magazine article. To conclude, it is translucent that mixed
schools
develop kids’ social skills require to their latter lives despite, the fact that
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schools
produce more academic results.
Contemporary
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world needs
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with good humane than high profiles.
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