Many small business are being forced to close because they are unable compete with multinational corporation? what problems does this cause and how can problems be solved?
In the
last
decade, plethora
of Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
companies
started their own business
. Unfortunately, since start-up companies
cannot compete with high tech organisations, they are tend
to get off from the Change the verb form
tend
business
. This
has caused some sort of issues in the
society, and the ramifications cannot be ignored. Correct article usage
apply
This
essay will advocate the causes and provide solutions.
Nowadays, most of the graduates wants
to be an entrepreneur. Apparently, when the small Change the verb form
want
companies
are forced to close, they causes
Change the verb form
cause
lake
of job opportunities most probably they would not prefer a fresher to placed in their company. Correct article usage
a lake
For example
, start-up companies
train and malleable the employees ideally to develop the skills. Furthermore
, due to closing
down of Correct article usage
the closing
small
Add an article
a small
the small
business
, the nation's 6level will be diminishing. Simultaneously, the poverty rate will be increasing.
To overcome the problem faced by small organisation's owners, to support them the government has to provide subsidies for the start-up Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
companies
to sustain in
the market. Correct pronoun usage
themselves in
In addition
, limiting the source of international companies
and encouraging the national companies
will create employment opportunities for national people, so that country's finance will drastically grow, poverty
rate will be slumped down. Add an article
the poverty
For example
, the American government appreciates all start-up companies
in the past era. Right now, American's
market is ruling on other Correct article usage
the American's
nation
.
To conclude, Fix the agreement mistake
nations
growth
of a developing country can be determined by globalization. Correct article usage
the growth
Closing
of small Correct article usage
The closing
business
can cause detrimental effects in the nation. To me, same as the multi-national Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
companies
, small companies
have to be treated in a positive way.Submitted by sudhanlatha328 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
