Some people think that governments should invest mainly in making public transportation faster while other think there are more important priorities (cost, the environment). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Whether governments spend money on
development
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the development
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of public
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system
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or other pressing issues divides citizens into two. In my opinion, the authority should allocate an equal amount of
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to all essential
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: advancement of road, environment, economy and so on. On the one hand, people supporting spending money to improve
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the speed
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of
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believe that
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tends to mobilise both
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and goods.
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,
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faster
transportation
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often
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tourists to visit different places within a shorter span of time, and the country seems to be developed by generating foreign income.
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, perishable food and vegetables,
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, will be transported from fields to sales outlets, so agriculture sectors will be flourished astonishingly.
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, society will enjoy
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quality of life.
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, the opponents of
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arguments consider other areas, which are highly essential than the
transportation
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need to be funded.
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, the government official
implement
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necessary
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countermeasures
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counter measures
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to reduce the cost of living. In
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scenarios, subsidies and loans are availed to buy affordable houses, start new businesses,
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. Another possible area is to be supported is our environment from getting polluted.
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, the authority would start investing in green energies
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as wind, tide and so on. I strongly think that all basic service sectors required to be financed since
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initiative will bring a tremendous change which
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not individuals’ life but a country as
a whole witness properties
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. In conclusion, even though people have different opinions about which are areas to be financed more than others. I view that every basic amenities need to be enhanced and no sector should exclude.
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