Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems.

Nowadays, there are many
people
who dream of becoming a well-known figure in their society. While
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will bring fame and prosperity for
people
, others
people
, including me, assert that being a celebrity have the
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potential
to cause misery and privacy invasion for famous
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individuals
. On the one hand, a group of
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people
opines that popularity has several
disatvantages
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disadvantages
for famous
people
.
Firstly
,
such
people
do not have control over their personal life since
photograpgers
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photographers
and
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try to pry into the affairs of their personal lives.
For example
, most
of
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celebrities
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,
such
as film stars and football
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players
, claim that they are disturbed by media while having
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dinner or browsing in
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shopping
malls.
In addition
, they allege that there some individuals who disseminate
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social media by posting false news and information so
such
distinguished figures are likely to respond to the
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criticisms
that
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arise
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, being a well-known celebrity brings nothing but misery since famous
people
are not able to enjoy their privacy and popularity
On the other hand
, many
people
believe that fame can provide celebrities with wealth and comfort.
This
is mainly because
such
individuals are paid
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a substantial salaries
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for acting in movies or
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playing
in games.
Nevertheless
, what
such
people
fail to see is that the lifespan of
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popularity
is short in many cases since there is
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that
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lose
their interest after a while.
However
,
such
fate is not true for some actors or
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actresses
actors
, because they might receive public attention for the whole of their lives. In conclusion,
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school
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of thought claims that being a celebrity will bring fortune and fame for renewed
people
, I contend that
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will bring about difficulties since famous
people
are annoyed by media and public invasion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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