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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this

#malls #shops
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In
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 spacious world, there are
plethora
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 of shoppes which is in small-scale
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 are facing pernicious effect due to large-scale shoppes like
malls
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, supermarkets.
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 causes jeopardy to small
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 to sustain in the market. The notion has some ramifications, which cannot be ignored.
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 essay will express my perspective. On the one hand, due to globalization increases the traditional way of shopping decreases.
People
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 are excited to be in trend rather than being in
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 way.
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,
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 have various kinds of collections of dresses, electronic items
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 high quality and from international brands. Comparatively, small
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 do not have
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 variant of collections.
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, hi-tech
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 have
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 deal of offers, discounts, gifts even though it's a marking strategy, it seeks the
people
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 to buy the product. To illustrate, in Phoniex mall, most of the fashion-related
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 have offer about 80% to 60% for 365 days.
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,
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 have different
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, where it will be easy for
people
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 to shop in a single area.
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,
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 have high revenue than the small
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, which is increasing the economy of the nation; comparing to street
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 the productivity will be higher in
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. To exemplify,
shops
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 in
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mall
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 have to pay taxes to the government that will impact the financial rate of the nation. Significantly,
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are need
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 to be hospitality, and security
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 will persuade to job opportunities for the community.
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, drastically, the cultural heritage got impacted due to the western lifestyle.
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people
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 are crazy to wear western culture dress and
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 caused impact the traditional behaviour. To conclude, even though the demand
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malls
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 increases, certain products will not be available. In my opinion,
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 will be more convenient for
people
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 to shop, based on the
people
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's wishes. Many number
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 have to develop.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • one-stop shopping
  • diverse products
  • convenience
  • amenities
  • food courts
  • entertainment options
  • local economy
  • commercial activity
  • artisanal
  • niche products
  • customer service
  • homogenization
  • cultural diversity
  • family-owned businesses
  • carbon footprint
  • online shopping
  • consumer preferences
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