In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent times,

children

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are encouraged to work for money in many parts of the world in order to gain

experience

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new trend is practised in many countries especially during summer and winter breaks. Some think it is a bad idea to introduce handling money at

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age while others think

jobs

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that pay can help to gain

experience

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and knowledge. Both sides of

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argument will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

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, paying

children

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at a very young age can be inappropriate as

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can eventually encourage them to start leading an independent

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allowing them to take their own decisions very early in

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can

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lead them to discontinue their studies.

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, my brother always worked during his summer break for small scale companies that ultimately led to disinterest in academics and at the age of ,18 he dropped out of college and began work.

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he gained

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in his early adult

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, it later became difficult to cope up with real working-class

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, some people think paid

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for

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can fetch

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and improve their learning ability.

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holds good as the short term benefit, there are big chances for a child being misled in the wrong direction because the money being available at all times. Going through internship programs in school or college

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, working for charity programs can

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allow one to gain knowledge and understanding about the society in which they live. To sum up, albeit people think paid

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can teach better values for

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, education is the key factor in success. In my opinion,

children

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should be discouraged from the idea of paid

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and should be encouraged more on education, charity programs and so on which eventually can lead to gaining valuable knowledge and

experience

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