Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

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last

few

decasdes

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decades

, many

animals

and birds are being added to the endangered

species

because of

increased

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the increased

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population in many

countires

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countries

. Wildlife

sanctuaries

are constructed in many countries to protect

from

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them from

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the risk of extinction. In

this

essay, I will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks and draw conclusions from

it

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them

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. I will start with the pros, saving

animals

at the verge of endangering would save the environment as well as

to

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apply

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save the

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wildlife

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wild life

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wildlife

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food chain. Most reasons for

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an animal

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animal

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animals

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going extinct is because, people hunt them for money, flesh, pride etc and

hence

constructing

sanctuaries

has become inevitable as it could be managed by

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an institution

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institution

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institutions

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and thereby saving

animals

getting disappeared. To add

on

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apply

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to it, saving

animals

not only

enchances

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enhances

the forest life but it creates a balanced ecosystem.

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,

few

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a few

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decades back,

number

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the number

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of tigers in

india

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were very little and because of conserving them in

sanctuaries

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,sanctuaries

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they have grown to a considerable number. Tigers are

a

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apex predator and it plays a key role in maintaining the balance of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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. On

ther

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the

other hand, building

sanctuaries

and maintaining them involves huge cost and it massive

man power

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. Another disadvantage would be is giving priority

for

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to

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set

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a set

the set

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of

species

and

treesat

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trees at

treat

trees

the cost of other remaining

species

. To conclude, there are both positive and negative in building

sanctuaries

but there needs to be a more structured approach so that it does not focus on only

few

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a few

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set

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sets

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of

species

so that we would have a better ecosystem to

livewith

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live with

.