Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

These days, there has been a passionate argument about students who are

addected

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addicted

to using the

internet

. As long as, some people believe that the

internet

has a lot of problems in educational progress that must be reduced. In

this

essay, I will examine the argument views

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before

reaching a concrete decision.

firstly

, it

is commonly trust

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that the

internet

has plenty

negative

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sides ,especially in learnings. From my perspective, many gadgets encourage students to learn new information. But, at the

,

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sametime

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same time

they will have so

much

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distributions. Illustrated by, applications notifications or received unnecessary phone calls.

furthermore

, there is a result from

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study shown that people who are using online sources to collect their data are less Focus.

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, others

whom

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who

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are using

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paper books are fully concentrated.

secondly

, there is a huge problem in their social life.

For example

, the more they are using

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social media to communicate with others behind the screen the more they have social distance in real life.

In addition

, they may

also

cause many health issues. In the case of, headache, neck pain and back pain. As well as they must have at least two hours away from their cell phones before going to bed to rest their eyes. to sum up, I would like to close

this

argument by assuring that the

internet

is a double-edged weapon.

Moreover

, the negative effects are way more than the positive effects. Even though, for students who are using it for educational

purpose

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or in their regular life to communicate to others.