Write a letter to your manager to report a mistake you found in a magazine article about your company In your letter • Describe the magazine and the article. • What was the mistake? • Explain what you would like the manager to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter regarding the blunder I caught in the story about our to-be-launched "Authentic" clothing line which was published in Vogue Magazine

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week. As you know our company published the article to spread the news in public regarding the kind of clothing we are going to bring

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summer

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the huge variety of designs and colours.

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of the paper, the launch date was mentioned in bold letters as it was the most important detail of the editorial. But as I checked, the Magazine printed the wrong date i.e. 16th of July

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of 16th of June which will have a severe effect on our first month's sales. So, I request you to contact the manager of Vogue Magazine to correct

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mistake as soon as possible by recalling all the printed magazines which have not sold yet and publishing a new story with the correct date. Looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Himanshu Bhatia

hemanshubhatia540Sun Mar 16 2025

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task achievement

Consider adding a brief introduction about the significance of the clothing line to enhance context.

coherence and cohesion

You might want to vary your sentence structure to improve the overall flow of the letter.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with separate paragraphs for different points.

task achievement

The tone is appropriate for a formal letter and conveys urgency effectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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