Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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crime

rate is getting worse and worse all over the world, and it is important to take steps to improve the situation.

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essay will look at the reasons for

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problem

and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the

problem

is that some people

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able to find appropriate jobs.

as a result

they are suffering from various psychological problems. By

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I mean that there are fewer jobs available for people and

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consequently

, the rate of

crime

is increasing significantly. The solution is for governments to support young people and give them opportunities to have

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combine with their certificates to

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frustration and depression which may lead to

crime

. Another cause is that

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exposure to abuse during childhood period. What I really mean by saying

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is that the parents are playing an important role in

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life of their children.

For instance

, the violence against kids may lead to rise their tendency to be offenders in the future. The way forward might to be a mercy parents to your children and protect them from any

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such

as violence or harassment. A

third

cause of the

problem

is that narcotics and drug abuse.

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large amounts of drugs in

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particularly among adolescents

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therefore

increase the proportion of

crime

range in communities. Dealing with

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issue involve whose have the authority to establish rules and policies

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goals to cut off any methods that lead to

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of

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toxic agent among our children. In conclusion, it is clear that there is no doubt that the

crime

rate is an increasing worry issue. In my opinion, the main responsibility for the

problem

lies with parents and governments. Actions must be taken urgently,

otherwise

, our societies will face greater safety problems in the future.