In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this?

In
this
contemporary era, It is irrefutable that the world population is growing very fast. Most
people
are moving from the backward areas to urban
cities
for a job. Need more new houses in many places to live, As we do not have any space in the developed
area
to build new
homes
.
therefore
, required to create new
homes
in the
countryside
. In my opinion, creating
homes
is more crucial in the
countryside
instead
of
protect
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them. In
this
essay, I will discuss my viewpoints with examples.
Firstly
, every person basic needs are food, clothes and home.
Therefore
, most of the
people
are
shiffted
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shifted
to urban areas to find a job and fulfil their needs.
Additionally
, If
population
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the population
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is increasing in
cities
then
society needs more shelters to accommodate everyone. But in
current
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situation
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we do not have a space to build more houses in
cities
,
thats
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that's
why occupying the rural areas to develop more
homes
.
For example
,
Delhi
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government conducted
the
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survey to
identified
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the other states folks who came into Delhi for a Job or higher education. As per the survey
report
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,report
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more than 50%
migrants
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of migrants
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came into Delhi in
last
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the last
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2 years. Though,
Government
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occupied the nearby land to build more shelters to accommodate the
people
.
Secondly
, creating more apartments in the rural
area
will reduce the modern
cities
traffic and pollution.
Moreover
, giving more opportunities to the village
people
to expand their business and earn more money to settle their lives.
For instance
, If multi-national companies are creating offices and apartments in the
countryside
area
then
they are providing a chance to civilians to improve their standards and live a happy life and minimizing the urban
area
traffic and pollution. In conclusion, my opinion is creating
homes
in the
countryside
is
good
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a good
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idea and helping the civilians to expand their
live
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life
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, reducing the pollution from
modern
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the modern
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metropolis and provide them
a
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better life.
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