In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this?

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In
this
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contemporary era, It is irrefutable that the world population is growing very fast. Most
people
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are moving from the backward areas to urban
cities
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for a job. Need more new houses in many places to live, As we do not have any space in the developed
area
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to build new
homes
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.
therefore
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, required to create new
homes
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in the
countryside
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. In my opinion, creating
homes
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is more crucial in the
countryside
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instead
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of
protect
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them. In
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essay, I will discuss my viewpoints with examples.
Firstly
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, every person basic needs are food, clothes and home.
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, most of the
people
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are
shiffted
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shifted
to urban areas to find a job and fulfil their needs.
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, If
population
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the population
a population
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is increasing in
cities
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then
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society needs more shelters to accommodate everyone. But in
current
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the current
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situation
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we do not have a space to build more houses in
cities
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,
thats
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that's
why occupying the rural areas to develop more
homes
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.
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,
Delhi
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the Delhi
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government conducted
the
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a
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survey to
identified
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the other states folks who came into Delhi for a Job or higher education. As per the survey
report
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,report
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more than 50%
migrants
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of migrants
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came into Delhi in
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last
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the last
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2 years. Though,
Government
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the Government
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occupied the nearby land to build more shelters to accommodate the
people
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.
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, creating more apartments in the rural
area
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will reduce the modern
cities
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traffic and pollution.
Moreover
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, giving more opportunities to the village
people
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to expand their business and earn more money to settle their lives.
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, If multi-national companies are creating offices and apartments in the
countryside
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area
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then
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they are providing a chance to civilians to improve their standards and live a happy life and minimizing the urban
area
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traffic and pollution. In conclusion, my opinion is creating
homes
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in the
countryside
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is
good
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a good
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idea and helping the civilians to expand their
live
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life
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, reducing the pollution from
modern
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the modern
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metropolis and provide them
a
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better life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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