The charts below give information about the typical temperatures in London, New York, and Sydney as well as total hours of sunshine for each city.

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The graph

illustrate

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London

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New-York

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and

Sydney

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as a city

with

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apply

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showing the total monthly temperatures and during the year they find

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an ovarage

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ovarage

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average

number of hours of sunshine. There are

graphline

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graphing

graph line

and table with annual hours for three

country

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. In

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the graph

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graph

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we can see that

London

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and

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New-York

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New York

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starts

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with small numbers and increase

than

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then

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return to the same levels

while

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Sydney

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start

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higher and in one period down and return.

Firstly

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, as I write above there are

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and

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New-York

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New York

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the countries started from January with 5 and 10

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slightly

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increase

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increased

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between seven

month

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months

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to 30 and 23

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Sydney

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decrease

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decreased

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steadily from 25 to 15. And

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stay same

while

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others fell in December to 5 and 10. By far annual hours of

sunshune

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sunshine

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New-York

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New York

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and

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twice

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are twice

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higher

than

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London

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while

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New-York

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New York

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just

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is just

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over

the

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apply

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Sydney

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words london, new-york, sydney with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

141 words

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Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a huge negative effect on both society and individuals. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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