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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for that? How can people research this?

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In today's world, many
people
 tend to be aware of the
history
 of houses that they live in. I believe that there are several factors which lead them to know that and in what ways they can get
information
 about their accommodation, Nowadays, the current trend of the art industry, more specifically in arts-related to interior design, is going toward old patterns. Many students of the art can find interesting Ideas from
history
 and combine them with modern technology. As result, their knowledge of the
history
 of buildings and old fashion houses can be beneficial for them. More
information
 about their past art can lead them to find more new ideas, which brings many effective new design ideas in their fields.
Moreover
, not only
people
 can't forget their past lifestyle, but
also
 their interest in historic places is becoming more and more. It means that humans' brains always tend to remember it's past like their childhood. Under
such
 circumstances, some things which remembered it's past can be invaluable for them. Because of that, they usually looking for the
history
 of the buildings, which can bring s their childhood memories. According to the ways that they can find out
information
 about the
history
 of the building, there are two common ways in order to search online and ask local
people
.
Firstly
, due to the advent of technological devices and
also
 the internet, many
people
 have the capability of accessing data of their accommodation easily. they can search the location of their building to learn and read
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 comments of the area
in
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 social media.
Secondly
, elderly neighbours always have interesting
information
. It means that they grow up in that area and know a huge amount of memories and data, which
people
 can have access to them just by asking a question from them. In conclusion, nowadays many
people
 are interested in
history
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 of the buildings for some personal reasons
such
 as improving their knowledge and remember their childhood and I believe that they can easily achieve
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 data just by asking and searching on the web.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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