Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some specialists consider that children should learn a foreign
language
at elementary school
instead
of secondary school.I totally agree with
this
statement. Learning languages demand a lot of
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, intelligence and
also
patience. When we were
infant
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, the natural instinct was dominant to us for learning
language
and using it when we are in need.
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child's brain is
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and its body is ready to receive new information . At
this
time, the child can easily learn and remember by hearing ,by seeing and
finally
by touching. It will be
also
efficient
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way if we try to teach the
second
language
early during
primary
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education period. If I come up with an idea to share with you my experience my ability for
language
learning was rather good
by comparison
to
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. Even though
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I did not learn by heart at home ,I used to learn by repeating after my teacher ,
this
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exaggeration
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.But I really managed to learn a poem even within five minutes.
Furthermore
, younger students can take knowledge by watching cartoons and some kind of visual aids.
However
, one thing should be taken into consideration while dividing the
language
learning age. It is not a good way to put overpressure
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young learners , if so , they might be exhausted , even they may
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their
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interest . In order not to do so, children should be taught to
second
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language
when they reach
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at
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maximum age . But , at that time , they might face more difficulties despite
of
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being older .
For instance
, they would already get used to speaking their own
language
.
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barrier might be
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a problem
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. In conclusion,In spite of being aware of some benefits of learning a new
language
at secondary school , I still agree that they should learn a
language
as much early as possible .
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