Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Growing
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population worldwide has
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own merits and demerits, which has resulted in a problem of fulfilling
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for production as well as disposal of the daily need items.
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suggest the ways in which government can play a key role to curb the amount of waste produced. There are two major factors behind
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of garbage.
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, the
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needs of everyday items required for survival, leading to higher scrap produced.
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usage of a milk product, after it is consumed, its wrapper
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straightaway
straight away
goes into the bin. Imagine the number of plastic wrappers thrown by every individual. Perhaps, in billions
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! The
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factor linked to the
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is modern use-&-throw culture. Most of the products, nowadays, are preferably sold in
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temporary packaging, like
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in
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tetra packs
or plastic covers, considering more comfort for the consumers.
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,
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once & throw culture adds up to the things collected in rubbish worldwide. To tackle
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issue,
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to
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every citizen, Governments have a key role to play. The
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and foremost action the management need to take is to regulate the usage of materials in which the goods are wrapped. Take India as an example, Indian Government has imposed the increase in the thickness of the polythene bags to 125microns, in favour of the fact that it could be easily recycled and
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for the same purpose in accordance with researches conducted over the same.
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, The Administration can
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run public initiatives for the people, by the people, to make them aware of the problems of increasing garbage globally. Just like, "Clean India campaign" started by
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prime minister. In conclusion, unless the efforts are made to shift public
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consciousness
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problem will only escalate. While the authorities have
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role to play,
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a sense
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of awareness and the responsibility at individual level is a critical part to avoid the surging amount of
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debris all over.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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