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An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Out of many differences between the
people
 of various countries,
language
 is
one
 big barrier that stops
people
 from coming together. In my
opinion
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this
 statement is quite true, as when
people
 will find it difficult to communicate with anyone they would try to avoid any sort of interaction with them.
Hence
, it is important that all the governments must agree to
one
language
 be adopted by the countries as a universal
language
 and that should be taught in all the countries at the school level. When
people
 come together from different backgrounds, speaking in a variety of styles and using translators to deliver their opinion to the other person
then
 it creates a delay in understanding which leads to minimum interaction with those individuals. If
this
 obstacle gets removed by adopting
one
language
 by all nations
then
 the conversation between
people
 would become less tedious and understandable by both parties.
Although
, it is a big challenge for all the governments to agree on giving
one
language
 a universal status because
this
 involves political decisions as well. Giving any
one
language
 a worldly rank would make that nation stronger compared to the rest of the nations. If we see, English and French have a strong economic status which overall has increased the standard of these nations. Making them a benchmark for immigrations to different places. If we look around, the very basic example we find is in the schools where students from different backgrounds study, and face difficulties if any new enrollment admits to the school with a different speaking way. The acceptance of
such
 students become a problem for the rest of the pupils.
Therefore
, if everyone is taught at least
one
 single
language
 which can be utilised everywhere in the world
then
this
 would minimise the barriers for
people
 of all ages.
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