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Nowadays parent put too much pressure on thier cgildern to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Children of today are not competing with the child
next
 door, but with the child of the global village;the world. In
this
 contemporary era, parents want their
child
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 to excel in everything.
Consequently
 , they end up pressurising their kids to win the rat race. Unfortunately ,
this
affect
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 the development of young
people
 in a negative trajectory.
This
 essay intends to analyse the reasons behind it as well as its impact.
Firstly
, parents of today strongly believe that doing very well in academics will help their kids to succeed in the future, in spite of knowing the fact that there are hundreds of opportunities available for the current generation even though they don't do well in academics. On top of that, elders of the modern world evaluate success in terms of money earned by a person.
For instance
,
people
 will address a millionaire as a successful person on the basis of wealth whereas nobody cares how stressed or unhappy he is in life.
Secondly
, nowadays, the family has
more
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 competitive spirit than the student who is studying.
For example
, the neighbours have a tendency to compare youngsters of their home with the one who lives opposite and compel  their kids to score better than the other. In
this
 rat race, they would not give
the
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 freedom to the young
people
 to choose what they desire for and
such
 restrictions make them rebel. To conclude, I reiterate that being too strict with the younger ones will have a colossal impact on their progress in
negative
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 way.
However
, the onus is on the guardians to encourage their youngsters to succeed in
such
 a way that towards the end they will be happy successful
people
.
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