In many countries, school-age children spend their free time doing homework. Is it a good or a bad thing? Give examples based on your own experience.

Spending leisure time in order to complete homework is fairly common among students these days. I think the trend is detrimental because

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tends not

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lower the chances to socialise with

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a friend

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friend

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but ruins physical health as well.

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essay will support my views and conclude appropriately at the end.

First

and foremost, during the pastime

activities

,

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allows school-going

children

to meet their friends and neighbours.

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meeting is

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one of the best ways to communicate with others and building trustworthy relationships, which tend

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many positive impacts. Especially, when the pupils get older, they will find

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to work within a team, understand and tolerate others.

For instance

, the

children

could pursue some extracurricular

activities

: drawing, dancing, swimming and so on.

Otherwise

, if they sat and did homework, students would find

difficulty

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to maintain

social

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relationship.

Secondly

, the lack of free time

activities

could be harmful to both

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and mental health of the young ones.

Although

studying during pastime

seem

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to be accurate, in the long

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it will bring damaging effects. Because of

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prolonged inactivity and social isolation, the

children

tend to become obese or

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over weight

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. Due to

this

, they often experience

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of confidence leading

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to psychological

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and medical problems. It has been noted that in America,

for example

, many

children

who avoiding engaging

free

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time

activities

experience mental and physical dysfunctions. In conclusion, engaging

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assignments during

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period

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highly likely to result in some negative impacts

in

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students’ live.

This

could be both bodily and mentally dysfunctions.