A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

Dear Chris, I am writing to offer some advice about the difficulties you faced recently at your new school. First. I suggest that you should take the initiative to talk to your colleagues in the same class, like participating in different kinds of sharing activities , and asking for help in some subjects every time you need it. Next. If you are interested in other activities, I recommend joining one of the clubs that the school holds every Friday morning, because

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kind of meeting may always develop your relationship with others.

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. There are some tips to follow in order to build a strong friendship , like always being confident and having a sense of community , and it would be better to help others at any moment they need you ,

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inviting them to a restaurant or to your home. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes. Mickel Smith.

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Sep 1, 2025

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structure

Make one main idea in each part. Start with why you write, then give steps, and end with a short friendly line.

language mechanics

Use short, clear sentences. Check full stops and commas.

tone

Be warmer in tone and keep a friendly, kind feel.

content

You tell your friend that you care and want to help.

structure

You give clear steps to join clubs and talk to others.

tone

You end with a hope to hear back.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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introduce yourself
genuine interest
rapport
like-minded individuals
school community
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