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is it becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

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Nowadays , as we can see,
media
 industries are more and more develop .It’s soon become popular and spread to the whole world . But some opinion said that
media
 now too large ,
it’s
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affect
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 to our world and makes a
lot
 of
people
 obsesses with it even can’t escape from it . In my opinion , I think everything has two sides , a
media –rich
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 society
are
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 helping many
person
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people
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 entertain and relax after work or study .
However
, we can’t too base on
media
 too much ,as
media
 can make you immersed and neglect in life. Look on the positive side ,
media
 bring a
lot
 of benefit to our life , sometimes
media
 vehicles helps many
person
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people
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 throw out all of
stress
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the stress
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 and have entertainment even at home.
For instance
 , because of covid 19
disease
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,
people
 now have less
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change
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 to go outsides so they choose
media
 vehicles
like
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 a way to
entertainment
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 and reduce stress . A
lot
 of
app
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apps
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 like
facebook
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Facebook
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 ,
twitter
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 ,
snapchat
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Snapchat
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 , youtube ,…and network
media
 born for that reason .
On the other hand
 ,
media
 still have many disadvantages like make many
person
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people
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 immersed and neglect in real life . What I
means
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 is when
people
to
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 dependent on
media
 social
as a result
 they will ignore all
work
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 and become lazy .
For example
 , children today are too
focus
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 on playing
video
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a video
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game
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, one
of
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kind
media
 app , and even forgot
take
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 care
for
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 themselves .It makes harm a
lot
 for their health. In conclusion , I think a
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media –rich
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 society has its own benefit and weaknesses , we can’t stop
people
 develop and stop using
media
 but we can let them some good
advise
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 about it .
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