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some people think that art is an essential subject for child at school, while others think it is a waste of time. discuss both side and give your opinion

#people #art #child #school #waste #time #side
Schooling has a vital role to play in
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upbringings
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 of a
child
 both intellectually and physically.
However
, there has been a long time
arguement
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argument
 going on about including
art
 as a mandatory subject in school. some people are far about having
art
 as a subject. While others argue that
art
 education
as
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 a vain attempt at school by a
child
 and consumes a lot of time. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both
the
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views and give my perspectives regarding
this
 notion.  Artistry has
an
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intangible
benifits
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benefits
benefit
 in nurturing a
child
's hidden talents. And
also
, it provides a medium through which
childern
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children
 can express their ideas.
In other words
, linguistic capabilities to put thoughts into verbal communication is arduous for a
child
. So,
art
 aids in expressing ideas through drawings or paintings.
For instance
, most of the
childern
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children
 psychologists check for a
child
's
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artwork
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art work
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artwork
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 to know better about his/her opinions and thoughts
On the other hand
, learning
art
 in school could be distractive and diverts a
child
 from studying main subjects, which has a deterrent effect on education. Some parents hold an opinion that artistry creates an imbalance in
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 in studies.
Moreover
, a
child
 loses focus on studies and inclined more towards
art
 and
extracurriculum
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extra curriculum
extra-curriculum
 activities rather than on
main
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 syllabus. In a nutshell, fair conspicuous for
above mentioned
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 paragraphs, I would go
alone
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 with the people who uphold the idea of having
art
 as a part of learning.
However
, it has to be learned equally alongside all other main
subject
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, especially under
supervision
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the supervision
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 of vigilant parents and teachers.
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