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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of lder people. do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, in some societies, the population of the young is significantly more than elderlies. From my perspective, it has more advantages than drawbacks.
On the other hand
, some people believe that growth in the number of the young has some drawbacks.
Although
 young people are interested in experiencing new methods, they usually are
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risk
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taker
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 and they live on the edge which will eventually lead to making more mistakes.
In addition
, generally the young are at the beginning of their professional life so it seems that
companies
 should spend plenty of time on teaching young employees some skills
such
 interacting with costumers and their colleagues, team working, analytical thinking. On the one hand, an
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 in the population of youth can be considered as a beneficial factor. The
first
 reason which is worth mentioning has a lot to do with career issues. State – of- the art facilities
such
 as computers has a resounding effect on businesses. Employees by using new technologies can do their jobs fast.
As a result
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companies
 are looking for the young because
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 the young people are more familiar with new gadgets and new applications. Increasing the number of young provides
companies
 with the golden opportunity to keep pace with new technologies and become competitive.
Moreover
,
although
 on a regular basis ,
companies
 should teach new employees some skills, the youth are very flexible and fast learners. They have
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powerful
brains
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 which makes the process of learning less time-consuming.
As a result
, they adjust themselves to changes very soon. To put all in shut, I totally believe that
although
 the increase in the population of the young may have some drawbacks,
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 advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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