Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

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significantly increased all over the world. Some countries have introduced smoke-free laws;
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protect those who do not smoke from secondhand smoke and help
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users quit. There are arguments on both sides of
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very debate, and I will discuss them now. On the one hand, some democratic countries prefer the rule that people should have freedom in their choice, but they don't concern that it's affecting public health. It is an irrefutable fact that smoking leads to lung cancer and other
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potentially fatal ailments.
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, critics of smoke-free legislation
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highlight the difficulty in government controlling implementation because cigarettes are a drug. One of the substance
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, few regions
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support the anti-smoking rules are giving opportunities based on human rights to both sides of individuals.
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, in Switzerland, prohibiting smoking in public spaces,
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, just confirms smoking in special areas. These simple steps
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protect children and pregnant women from secondhand
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. It might
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be said that following the rule is a great way to reduce cigarette butt waste. These litters contain chemical toxins
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water and soil, where they can remain for as long as more than 10 years, but some people thought that they were produced by paper.
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, smoking is a personal choice and governments will probably not ban
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in the near future. If smokers would have consciously used a smoking area which
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of secondhand smoking and
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butts waste.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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