Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Child
education by parents
is believed to be more beneficial than by teachers. On contrary , another group has an opposite thought. I personally think that it is undeniable fact that school play a big role in the development
of child
's personality, professionally and it's thinking capability. In this
essay, I will explain reasons along with instances supporting my statement.
Firstly
, children learn better from the teacher as they are well versed with problems of children and former correct them whenever needed. This
teaching not only limited to study, it can involve basic manners, dining table rules and ways of greeting elders as teachers are more capable of tackling their problems. Secondly
, they learn to play music, sports or activities in school, which is also
a very important part of a child
's development
. For instance
, playing sports at the school level makes them more passionate about the game and many of them later opt it
as a profession.
On the other side of the coin, Change preposition
for it
parents
too help the child
's personality and social development
, as parents
are the first
teacher of children. As parents
more capable of encouraging them to complete any task, they learn better in a homely environment. They discuss their problems openly with guardians, which can be rectified at the earliest, as they are more attached to them emotionally. For instance
, preparation for an examination or event gets a boost after getting the parent's support as it makes them mentally strong.
By the way of conclusion, no doubt the parents
are pillars for child
development
but the role of teacher cannot be underestimated.Submitted by davinder_ju on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite