Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Leading a healthy lifestyle seems to be difficult in
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modern world, according to some. Others,
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, consider it is possible if they are willing to keep not only fit but healthy as well. In my opinion, I agree with the latter’s view since the latest technology and gadgets are available. On the one hand, people who argue maintaining physical fitness is a real challenge believe that stress and
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are the two main causes. Due to the various factors: personal and
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reasons lead to undue
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tensions
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and worries, tiredness, and lack of energy are often leading to
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diseases.
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, having a busy
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, people often forget
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and taking sufficient resting time
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prevent them
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health and fitness at an optimum level. Even though
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scenario is true to
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extent, it has been noted that it is possible to have
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living. On the
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hand, opponents of the above-mentioned argument think that
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time offers
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plenty of opportunities to keep fit and healthy.
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, since the access to use the internet, different kinds of tips and tricks are available;
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, how to avoid tension, when to exercise with limited pieces of equipment, and good eating habits and so on. If these facilities did not find now, there would see more patients.
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, I firmly believe that those who are willing to take effort could lead both stress and
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. In conclusion, people have different opinions on whether
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modern
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ensures healthy living or not. I personally consider that due to the presence of the internet and other gadgets, it is possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • caloric intake
  • processed foods
  • dietary choices
  • fitness regimen
  • nutritional awareness
  • chronic diseases
  • preventative healthcare
  • lifestyle diseases
  • well-being
  • metabolic rate
  • food deserts
  • healthy eating habits
  • bioavailability
  • physical activity
  • body mass index (BMI)
  • cardiovascular health
  • mental resilience
  • exercise regimen
  • holistic lifestyle
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