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Computer games for example PUBG should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

#computer #games #pubg
Playing
computer
games
 like PUBG and Fornite has become very popular among
children
, if not adults. Several people complain that students should be restricted to play these
games
.
However
, others argue that online
games
 benefit the younger generation. I completely agree with the assertion that establishes a prohibition on playing
computer
 sports.
This
 essay will substantiate my opinion in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
To begin
 with, these online pastimes has been popular in
this
 era. Especially,
children
 are the most targeted victims of these
games
 by spending long hours on
computer
 which impact their physical and mental health. They cannot concentrate on their studies which will affect their future. Screens of computers or phones emit
a
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bright
rays
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 which
is
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 harmful
for
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 the eyes of people.
Moreover
, playing online
games
 creates
a psychological issues
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psychological issues
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 resulting in
a
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little sleep, stress, and anxiety because of the excitement. According to
the
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 recent study, people are killing themselves out of stress and for
disappointment
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the disappointment
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 of losing the matches.
Hence
, banning these
games
 will help individuals to attain a healthy life.
Although
,
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 playing online
games
 makes
children
fun
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, it
develop
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 into an addiction.
Games
 like PUBG
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nd
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and
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 Fornite will distract the students from the academy. Due to which their university marks will get impacted. Scoring low grades in the annual exams, directly affect their job placements conducted by their
univerisities
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universities
.
Furthermore
, they become less active in any of the
sport
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 activities due to restricting themselves
for
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 playing these
games
. Despite
of
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being inactive at college, they become
hyper focused
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 on matches which results in mood swings.
For instance
, due to the weakness for these
games
, a college student obtained 15% in his academics which resulted in giving supplementary for the same.
Therefore
,
computer
games
 should be prohibited for
children
. In conclusion, PUBG and Fornite online
games
 are affecting
the
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children
 health as well as distracting their future. So,
its
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 better to forbid
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 of them at least for their offspring.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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