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in many families today, both the parents are working. what are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

#families #parents
In
this
 competitive world, earning
money
 is enormous hard for some masses, who are uneducated and
money
 is a fundamental need for every human being to survive in an exorbitant world;
however
, in present time in most families father and mother
both
 are working and it has
both
 merits and demerits. In
this
 essay, I explain
both
 of the aspects in
further
 paragraphs. Focusing on the positive side, earning a handsome amount of
money
 is always beneficial for every folk because they can fulfil their daily needs and
also
 they could save
money
 for the future.
Moreover
, if
both
parents
 are working
then
 they can give better lifestyle and education to their
children
, which helps them for their future career.
For instance
, one of the surveys conducted in the USA state that there are 60% of the family,
both
parents
 are working,
thus
 they can fulfil their
children
 requirements on facilitate way. Focusing on the darker side, if
both
parents
 are working
then
 it creates a vulnerable situation for their
children
 because
parents
 could not spend adequate quality time with their child and,
as a result
, sometimes they make unordinary friends throw online and often attempt
crime
. To illustrate, in India,
crime
 rates incline tremendous on teenagers and one of the surveys reveals that 40% of offenders who attempts
crime
, their
both
parents
 are working. To conclude,
although
 working with
both
parents
 are always beneficial because they can fulfil their needs, but if
parents
 could not take care of their
children
 activity
then
children
 feel vulnerable and often attempt
crime
.
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