t is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
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reading become less popular among
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, there are several reasons in
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of that phenomenon. In
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I not only elaborate it but
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level in the kids? There
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deeply connected hi-technology,
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a new book by
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in Canada reveals that 70%
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students spent 6.5 hours per day with trendy gadgets.
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clay, anyone can easily mould it whatever shape they like, so if parents and teachers take some primitive steps that it is easy to get them in the reading phase.
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child
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to minimize by the guardian and along with it they can develop the hobby of reading in that
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and give chance to students
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the vital role of reading in their future. To illustrate it, USA each school set two
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of reading
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in each semester. To conclude
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trend is
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in teenagers because of more involvement in technology and not aware of the plus point of reading.
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can influence them towards reading by proper
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelming presence
  • auditory stimulation
  • imagination
  • concentration
  • digital content
  • role models
  • captivate
  • e-books
  • interactive reading apps
  • positive reinforcement
  • gamify
  • communal engagement
  • personalized reading recommendations
  • foster
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