“ Many people think that men should go out to work while women’s place is in the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”
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men
should go for Correct article usage
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job
whereas Fix the agreement mistake
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women
should be at home looking after their families. I totally disagree to
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women
are nowhere lesser than men
and they should be treated equally as men
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Firstly
, in this
generation, there is no gender discrimination in the
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Although
men
work
for their survival, women
at the same time can work
and manage household chores. Infact
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In fact
women
are experts in multitasking their duties. According to the
recent survey, Correct article usage
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women
who work
are achieving things both at workplace
and in their Add an article
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house
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houses
Moreover
, men
can only concentrate on one thing at a time, unlike women
. They also
look after their children and elderly people at home.
Secondly
, not only men
but also
women
should focus on their career goals. Nowadays everyone is educated and has a right to live in
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career oriented
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career-oriented
Furthermore
, men
should encourage women
to make them successful in their achievements which motivates them. For example
, a couple who stays in Russia, who started online
business, Add an article
an online
husband
named the site on her wife as the idea was generated by her. So, giving credit for their ideas makes them motivated and respected.
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a husband
women
's place is not in the house, and not only men
should work
. It depends on the equality and encouragement provided to each other. Despite of
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the
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women
should focus on their career
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careers
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