“ Many people think that men should go out to work while women’s place is in the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Several people argue that
men
should go for
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job
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whereas
women
should be at home looking after their families. I totally disagree
to
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the above statement as
women
are nowhere lesser than
men
and they should be treated equally as
men
.
This
essay will substantiate my
agreements
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in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
Firstly
, in
this
generation, there is no gender discrimination in
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society.
Although
men
work
for their survival,
women
at the same time can
work
and manage household chores.
Infact
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In fact
,
women
are experts in multitasking their duties. According to
the
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recent survey,
women
who
work
are achieving things both at
workplace
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the workplace
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and in their
house
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.
Moreover
,
men
can only concentrate on one thing at a time, unlike
women
. They
also
look after their children and elderly people at home.
Secondly
, not only
men
but
also
women
should focus on their career goals. Nowadays everyone is educated and has a right to live
in
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their own pace. Recently, a lady who won
gold
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medal in archery is
a
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career oriented
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.
Furthermore
,
men
should encourage
women
to make them successful in their achievements which motivates them.
For example
, a couple who stays in Russia, who started
online
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an online
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business,
husband
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a husband
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named the site on her wife as the idea was generated by her. So, giving credit for their ideas makes them motivated and respected. In conclusion,
women
's place is not in the house, and not only
men
should
work
. It depends on the equality and encouragement provided to each other. Despite
of
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the
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society beliefs, very
women
should focus on their
career
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careers
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.
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