In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?
In today's generation, many minority languages
extinct
silently. Some people think it is normal and some are not. The idea provokes a strong argument, which I will consider here. First of all, Supporters think it is normal in globalization because it is generally thought that wide-spread Add a missing verb
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means if we speak few
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Secondly
, learning a second language
is
can be challenging. If we spoke one Unnecessary verb
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, it would beneficial
for everyone, especially in Add a missing verb
be beneficial
this
era. At least we don’t have to struggle to learn a second tongue. On the other hand
, when a language
dies, the world loses valuable cultural heritage - a great deal of the legends, poems, and knowledge gathered by generations is simply lost. Most historical documents and culture are written in the old native language
. This
means losing language
is not simple, if we lose dialect it leads to losing everything about the country. Finally
, speaking own
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our own
language
is a proud thing, it separates us from other nation
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nations
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For example
, if the world only speaks English or Chinese, we may become part of their nation and no one know our real nationality or culture, even we will forget them soon. To conclude
, speaking a strong language
may have benefits but losing the native language
is a tragedy. Those whose language
dies lose part of their identity. it is definitely something we should prevent.Submitted by alexstudyin on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite