Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way; to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Promotions are
contorlloing
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controlling

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people
in
defeatist
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way
.
Advertisments
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are
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important

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improtant
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an improtant

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role in
business
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the business

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industry. I am going to explain
the
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my view to what extend
i
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agree or disagree.
Advertiement
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Advertisement
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are
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is

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way
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ways

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you can see in
mazines
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magazines

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,
pamplets
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pamphlets

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or in any other
socail
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social

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media. these can attract
people
in many ways like the
piture
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picture

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, context or the stamenet it depends on what type it is. There
are
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plathora
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plethora

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way
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ways

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to disagree
this
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with this

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statement. I can give one example here, one person saw the
advertiement
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advertisement
advertisements

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on
pamplet
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pamphlet

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it was about the clothing
brand
and that
brand
never give
pamplet
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pamphlet

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or do any
advertisement
like
this
and
this
lady was not aware
about
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that may be she was busying
first
timelike
this
. The sale was like if you
byu
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buy

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any two
product
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products

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you can get
third
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the third
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product on 80%. The fact is
brand
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the brand
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company will never
sale
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sell

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any cloth on 80%
wather
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water

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it is the
third
or
second
cloth. And
next
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the next

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day she went to the store and showed
coupon
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the coupon

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to the store and they were
shoked
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shocked

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because they did not
done
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this
advertisement
. The owner talked to the lady and explained
her
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to her

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everything that it was a scam. As you know advertisements are
best
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the best

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way
to describe
about
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your company or
brand
but using
in
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a negative
way
may lead to
bad
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a bad

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impact on society. The other
way
of using
this
in a bad
way
is by having fake
acoounts
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accounts

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related
business
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to business

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most
of
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the
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people
use social sites for
business
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a business
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update
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updates

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or
anyother
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any other

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brand
update
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updates

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.
Moreover
, many
people
send text
message
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messages

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as code to do the
advertisement
but when you open all your phone detail goes to the person who
send
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this
code. So, I
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agree with
this
negative use. On the
otherside
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other side

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, there are some good points of advertising as well
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company

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comapny
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can promote
there
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business
by
advertsising
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advertising

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,
share
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market always
do
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something for
there
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their

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comapny
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company

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. To conclude,
people
should be aware
with
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this
fake
advertisement
. I personally agree that
this
negative influencer should not promote doing
business
like
this
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