Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
believe that
History
is one of the most important school subjects.
However
, some others believe that in today's
world
, subjects like Science and
Technology
are more important than
History
. In my opinion, each view has its own merits in that case we have to separate into two halves to discuss these statements.  On the one hand, learning
History
gives us some knowledge about what
people
have done in the past.
Furthermore
, the information that we obtained
of
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the field can help us to learn and prevent us from making the mistakes of our past generations.
For instance
, if we do not have
History
subject
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maybe
World
Wars 1 and 2 and maybe we may not know exactly how these events happen.
Moreover
,
History
helps
people
to stay away from
violation
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.
On the other hand
, Science and
Technology
are more important in today
world
especially in the era of 4.0
Technology
.
This
is why curriculums
such
as Chemistry, Biology, Physics, Math still are still crucial in school.
For example
, we can see that without
technology
, the time that we have to spend on developing an item will be increased significantly.
Nevertheless
, when we bought some items in the supermarket and if we do not know the
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and additives which contain in that items we may face serious consequences.
Moreover
, if we do not study Math or Physics, it is impossible to create codes on the computer or have a clear explanation of events that occur in our surrounding
world
. In conclusion, we may see that
History
and Science brings a lot of benefits in our daily life
especially
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in the
world
that
people
have to think a lot about it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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