There is a new ready-mixed concrete (RMC) plant installed nearby your home and it causes various types of pollutions. Write a letter to City Council for a removal request. In your letter • describe who you are • explain what troubles you by existence of this RMC plant • tell what you want the officer to do for you

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Smith, and I reside at Green Avenue E, WestGate ON. I have been living there for the past 8 years. I am writing

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letter to show my disappointment regarding the installation of a new ready-mixed concrete plant near my apartment. Let me elaborate on the situation. When the machinery starts, it generates so much noise pollution because of the same I am unable to focus on my studies

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facing a sleeping disorder problem.

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, it creates massive air pollution which does not let me stand on my balconies;

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, I have to wear a mask whenever I am required to go outside. All types of these pollutants have threatened my peace of mind. It is a clear administrative blunder of the City Council by authorizing

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industrial plant in the residential vicinity. Considering the gravity of the matter, I would request you to shift

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RMC with immediate effect. I solicit your cooperation. My coordinate is (555) 456 982, and my email address is [email protected]. Yours Faithfully, Smith.

niksmd1991Wed Jul 07 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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