Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that
majority
of the urgent Correct article usage
the majority
problem
can solved
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be solved
by
globally. I completely agree with the idea.
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apply
Nowdays
many Correct the word
Nowadays
nation
face various kinds of environmental and Change to a plural noun
nations
others
problems like Correct quantifier usage
other
health
, education and a few number
of Change to a plural noun
numbers
country
's people join war
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the war
for
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to
save
their Change the verb form
saving
nation
. Educational
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The educational
problem
can certainly Fix the agreement mistake
problems
solved
by local government. They are now capable to solve those kinds of easy Change the verb form
be solved
problem
. But environmental and Fix the agreement mistake
problems
health
sector problem
is incresing
dramatically. Climate change is a global Correct your spelling
increasing
problem
and many international organaization
work for Correct your spelling
organization
solved
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solving
this
. Althrough
lot of money Correct your spelling
Although
also
invest local othority
. But some Correct your spelling
authority
problem
is really huge and totally out of contral
. Correct your spelling
control
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In specially
Specially
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Especially
health
sector, we see without Correct your spelling
first-class
first class
firstclass
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a firstclass
country
most of the country
still suffer on
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in
health
sector. They have not good facilities and except some Add an article
the health
nation
most Add a comma
,nation
country
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countries
are
not capable to produce medicine. So others import medicine from Change the verb form
is
these
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this country
these countries
country
. Now covid 19 Corona virus
is Correct your spelling
Coronavirus
a
dangerous for Change the article
apply
whole
world. Without vaccine and maintaining anty covid 19 instruction we can not overcome Change the article
the whole
from
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apply
this
. This
type of urgent problem
is impossible to solve individually. So World Health
Organaization
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Organization
others
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other
developped
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developed
country
try to Fix the agreement mistake
countries
helped
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help
for
overcome that Change preposition
to
problem
. On the other hand
, some problem
are related to politics. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
For
example
some Add a comma
,example
nation
are involved with war for liberation. Fix the agreement mistake
nations
This
type of problem
only can solved
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be solved
by
globally. Change preposition
apply
Besides
, in many countries
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,countries
terorists
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terrorists
also
increased and they are really dangerous. So for
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to
make
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making
this
world peaceful
we should work globally.
In conclusion, most of the Add a comma
,peaceful
country
not capable to handle some big problem
without Fix the agreement mistake
problems
help
of international cooperation and all most all urgent Add an article
the help
problem
only can solved
globally because Change the verb form
be solved
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an individual
individual
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individuals
have
no ability.Change the verb form
has
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite