Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of the urgent
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globally. I completely agree with the idea.
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many
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nation
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face various kinds of environmental and
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problems like
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, education and a few
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of
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's people join
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their
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can certainly
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by local government. They are now capable to solve those kinds of easy
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problem
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. But environmental and
health
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sector
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is
incresing
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increasing
dramatically. Climate change is a global
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and many international
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organization
work for
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this
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.
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lot of money
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invest local
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authority
. But some
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is really huge and totally out of
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control
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health
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sector, we see without
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first-class
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most of the
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still suffer
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health
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sector. They have not good facilities and except some
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nation
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most
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country
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are
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not capable to produce medicine. So others import medicine from
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country
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. Now covid 19
Corona virus
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is
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dangerous for
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world. Without vaccine and maintaining anty covid 19 instruction we can not overcome
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this
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type of urgent
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is impossible to solve individually. So World
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Organaization
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Organization
others
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developped
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developed
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country
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countries
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try to
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for
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overcome that
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.
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, some
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are related to politics.
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some
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are involved with war for liberation.
This
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type of
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only can
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by
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globally.
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, in many
countries
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terorists
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terrorists
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increased and they are really dangerous. So
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make
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world
peaceful
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we should work globally. In conclusion, most of the
country
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not capable to handle some big
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problem
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without
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the help
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of international cooperation and all most all urgent
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only can
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globally because
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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have
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no ability.
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