Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of the urgent
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globally. I completely agree with the idea.
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many
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face various kinds of environmental and
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problems like
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of
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save
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their
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problem
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can certainly
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by local government. They are now capable to solve those kinds of easy
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. But environmental and
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sector
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is
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dramatically. Climate change is a global
problem
and many international
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this
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lot of money
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invest local
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country
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health
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sector. They have not good facilities and except some
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are
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not capable to produce medicine. So others import medicine from
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country
. Now covid 19
Corona virus
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is
a
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dangerous for
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world. Without vaccine and maintaining anty covid 19 instruction we can not overcome
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this
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developped
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try to
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overcome that
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are related to politics.
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are involved with war for liberation.
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globally.
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terorists
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we should work globally. In conclusion, most of the
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without
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of international cooperation and all most all urgent
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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