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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#education #healthcare #government
Expense on
education
 and health is an integral part of people’s lives and well-being.
Therefore
, it is argued that all the funding for these
two
 facets should be
government’s
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 responsibility because
this
 will enable people to access these facilities for of charge. I agree with
this
 statement completely.
One
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 on hand, if funding for
education
 and healthcare industry came from the private sector it would benefit individuals involved in these projects more as compared to the general public. These individuals will be able to gain revenues
as a result
 of innovation in new technologies or techniques in these
two
 fields. Due to these revenues generated
as a result
 of innovation, they would be willing to discover something new for
scientific
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 community or create a new teaching technique from which only a few will be able to benefit due to high prices.
Although
this
 will bring about progress still the progress will be limited to a few people in the
society
.
Therefore
, in order to make these
two
 necessities
accessible
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 the
government
 should intervene in their funding.
On the other hand
, if the
government
 made a contribution to these sectors, the overall
society
 will benefit as there would be social equality.
This
 is due to the fact that the
government
 has more resources, information and can impact
the
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society
 on a macro level. All the communities in the
society
 will be able to get
education
 and healthcare free of prejudice.
For example
, the covid-19 vaccination is free and accessible to everyone. Despite class or any other societal differences
such
 as race or religion.
Similarly
, in
education
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the education
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 sector Pakistani
government
 is contributing or funding the SNC project, which stands for
single
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the single
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 national curriculum.
This
 curriculum will enable single teaching methods across both private and
government
 schools to eradicate the disparity between the
two
. In conclusion, I believe the
government
 should invest in the health and
education
 sector because it would be contributing due to utilitarian purposes
not
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 just profit purposes
moreover
,
this
 investment will help bring social equality and long term progress.
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