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Some feel executives in large companies should receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that management personal in huge firms gains a high
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 whilst others say that executives get more money than their employees. While
workers
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 are dissatisfied with their
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 in comparison with the principal, I strongly believe that it is justified that managers deserve a high wage because they face a lot of problems and must cope with them. On the one hand, labourers perform a lot of tasks, but earnings do not correspond to their number of jobs. Performing many assignments ordinary
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 are inclined to think that they deserve a high paid
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, because, in
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 way, many energies and efforts are spent by
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 in order to complete their job tasks.
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, in survey company named ,Alga all the
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 are done by an ordinary specialist, which includes different kind of surveys,
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 as levelling, GPS shooting etc.
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, I consider that the specialists do not face plenty of pressure during their
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, because they perform their usual assignment according to an action plan.
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, executives, as a rule, clash with the problems and solve them by working out the schedule. Even though employees carry out many job tasks employers accomplish important and useful
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 in order to organize an appropriate accomplishment of a project or job, so in
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 is the main reason why the managers have had a
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 higher than their
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.
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, in big companies,
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 as Google, Facebook and so on, responsibilities on all the choices are laid on executives and handle with all pressure and risks. In conclusion,
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 ordinary
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 execute many assignments, they do not deserve the same level of
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 as their employers
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 they cope up with all pressure and must develop a
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 plan in order to achieve goals.
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