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some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. others argue believe it is best to travel by bicycle. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days use of fossil fuels is enormous which is why air pollution increased;
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 few people think that vital path to roam within the city by
bicycle
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 while others pretend that with a car. If asked, I disagree with the sentence that bicycles fulfil our needs all the time and ample reasons for that discussed in
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 paragraphs. The foremost reason for my support is, nowadays masses
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 a significant compare to the past;
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, if community
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 with their family
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 it is not possible to
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 by
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. To illustrate, in an individual family if parents live with their kids
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 children might not
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bicycle
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 properly and it is
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 risk for an accident.
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, a car is an inevitable need for them.
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, sometimes medical emergency occurs
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 by
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 consume plenty of time and it is
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 a risk for patient life. Another reason for my support is, physical handicapped could not
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 bicycles frequently and it is
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 a serious situation to
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 a
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 on a traffic jams road.
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, an ageing person might be not physically fit to
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 the cycle.
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, most elder people suffering from diseases
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 as cardiac and blood pressure,
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 it is a tremendous danger for them.
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, adult and adolescents should us cycle more than a car because it enhances their physical strength ,
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 using
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also
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 decrease noise and air pollution because the use of non-renewable fuel: oil and petrol would be
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 declined. To conclude,
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 every individual could not
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bicycle
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 for travelling within the city due to their physical ability.
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, adults and younger should use more cycles for
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