Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Other major do you think my effective?

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people
believe that
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in the
fuel
price is
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effective way to reduce
the
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pollution
and high
traffic
congestion. I strongly agree that
this
change could bring
difference
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a difference
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in the
soulutions
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toward
traffic
jam and environment. Many
people
have a
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belief

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that the reduction in
pollution
and
traffic
jam is done by
rising
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raising

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the cost of
petrol
or
reuired
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required

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fuel
.
This
is possible because
in
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these days
people
are getting paid less
inspite
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of working hard for long hours,
For example
,
people
in Hyderabad city are getting paid on an average of 8000 per month, if the
petrol
rates are increased from 65 to 100 rupees, it is difficult to balance their
expences
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expenses

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if they have to spend 100 rupees daily on
fuel
. Increasing
petrol
prices could forcibly make them
to
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travel by other means of transport like public transport
such
as
metro
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or local buses which are cheaper.
As a result
, there will be a great reduction in air
pollution
and heavy
raod
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road

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blockage in cities.
However
, there
are
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some
pupil
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pupils

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who
are
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interested to travel
in
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their personal
vehciles
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vehicles

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despite
of
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the
petrol
rates.
This
is
becuase
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because

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they are comfortable travelling by their own vehicle as the vehicles might be expensive.
for instance
, if a person owns a
ferari
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Ferrari

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car, he is more likely to travel in it rather availing public transport
becuase
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he will feel secure travelling in it,
Consequently
the
traffic
jam will be the same or might increase as well as the air
pollution
. In conclusion, I strongly agree that a surge in
fuel
prices will definitely bring change in
traffic
congestion and
pollution
issues. I recommend that if it is
follwed
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followed

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in a particular organized way by increasing gradually, it could give massive results.
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