Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Other major do you think my effective?

Many

people

believe that

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in the

fuel

price is

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effective way to reduce

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pollution

and high

traffic

congestion. I strongly agree that

this

change could bring

difference

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a difference

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in the

soulutions

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solutions

toward

traffic

jam and environment. Many

people

have a

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belief

that the reduction in

pollution

and

traffic

jam is done by

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the cost of

petrol

or

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required

fuel

.

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is possible because

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these days

people

are getting paid less

inspite

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in spite

of working hard for long hours,

For example

,

people

in Hyderabad city are getting paid on an average of 8000 per month, if the

petrol

rates are increased from 65 to 100 rupees, it is difficult to balance their

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if they have to spend 100 rupees daily on

fuel

. Increasing

petrol

prices could forcibly make them

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travel by other means of transport like public transport

such

as

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or local buses which are cheaper.

As a result

, there will be a great reduction in air

pollution

and heavy

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road

blockage in cities.

However

, there

are

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some

pupil

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pupils

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who

are

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interested to travel

in

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their personal

vehciles

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vehicles

despite

of

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the

petrol

rates.

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is

becuase

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because

they are comfortable travelling by their own vehicle as the vehicles might be expensive.

for instance

, if a person owns a

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Ferrari

car, he is more likely to travel in it rather availing public transport

becuase

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because

he will feel secure travelling in it,

Consequently

the

traffic

jam will be the same or might increase as well as the air

pollution

. In conclusion, I strongly agree that a surge in

fuel

prices will definitely bring change in

traffic

congestion and

pollution

issues. I recommend that if it is

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followed

in a particular organized way by increasing gradually, it could give massive results.