Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is the opinion of some that the usage of

air

travels in the future will be reduced. While there are benefits

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notion, I believe

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drawbacks will be more significant. Admittedly, reducing

the

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air

flights is considered worthwhile for the environment.

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is because all of the jet

planes

rely on

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fossil fuel,

thus

they produce a toxic fume that

cause

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a detrimental effect on the environment. With that in mind, if the

air

flights are reduced,

this

will definitely lead to minimizing the

air

pollution

,

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and minimizing the effects of harmful phenomena

such

as the Green House. An additional advantage, many people around the world especially who live near

airport

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, complaining from the severe noise caused by the

air

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aeroplanes

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planes

.

Therefore

, minimizing

air

flights will contribute to a better life for them as some of them might develop a medical condition due to continued exposure

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these noises. Having said that , there will be a significant impact in terms of

economy

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on multiple

countries

.

This

is due to many

countries

depend on

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tourism as a fundamental income for

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economy

as the tourism industry essentially requires

air

travel to transport people from one country to another in

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of hours only.

For example

, in my country, Egypt, a substantial number of tourists come from all over the globe by

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air

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aeroplanes

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planes

, and they benefit my local country

economy

by the foreign currency they pay.

Hence

, if these tourist numbers are minimized,

this

will lead to a negative repercussion on

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.

Secondly

, several

countries

such

as China and The United States will suffer as well as one of their prime sources for profiting is simply by exporting goods by delivering them by

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air

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aeroplanes

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planes

. In conclusion,

although

reducing

air

travels

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will lead to a better and clean environment, I hold the notion that it might cause an adverse effect on the

economy

of multiple

countries

around the world.