world history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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one woman
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, one woman,
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, I agree that under male command, the Linking Words
world
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, in the past, feminine leadership were not Linking Words
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neither a highly discussed topic, because Correct article usage
an incentive
women
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like
men
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less violent incidents due to more Correct your spelling
correlate
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men
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for instance
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women
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men
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