In some countries the elderly is put into nursing homes rather than being taken care of by their family. Do you see this as a positive or a negative development?

Recently, in some nations, people prefer to put their elderly

relatives

into nursing houses than dividing

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between siblings or even grandchildren to take care of

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aged person. Personally, I see

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as a beneficial situation for the person who is being taken care of and in

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essay, I will discuss some pros and cons regarding

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topic.

To begin

with, even though it is not an easy decision for the family, there are positive outcomes for

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person in

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specialised place. To explain, nursing homes are a better infrastructure than a regular person’s house. Over there, there

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certain equipment that a regular person’s house certainly would not have.

Thus

, they are more efficient and rapid regards health assistance if something might occur.

Additionally

, there are professionals working there full-time to help in any matter the elderly may need.

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house is a positive solution to provide professional support to the family. Deepen into

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regard, some families use

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as a solution to get rid of their old

relatives

and barely visit them.

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is a frequent behaviour of some, unfortunately, and describes perfectly a downside. Families must constantly visit their

relatives

to surveil the treatment they are receiving

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because despite the professionalism expected, they might misconduct with certain situations. Another important point is that a professional does not place a relative, and

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why the family cannot let the loneliness feeling dominate who is living in nursing homes. They need to be present due to

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a good relationship with their parents or grandparents. In conclusion, with the ageing society, some families opt to put their old

relatives

into nursing homes

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of taken care

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themselves. I see positive consequences, because not only they will be assisted by professionals, but

also

their relationship with their family will improve.