Modern technology is now very common in most place of work. how do you think this had changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

In almost all places of work, recent
technology
is now commonplace, as
this
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improvement in many Industries by increasing productivity. The negative effect of depending on
technology
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To begin
with, the evolution of
technology
has brought great changes to the occupational sphere resulting in an easier and faster method of
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task
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, increasing
work-output
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and ultimately achieving goals.
For example
, bankers no longer have to sit long hours balancing debit and credit transactions, rather they enter these transactions into the computer and the work is done within a few seconds with no errors recorded as against when carried out by humans.
Furthermore
, heavy lifting and manual jobs
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by employees in the past can now be carried out by computerized machines . Evidently, industrialisation increases productivity and create a better outcome.
On the other hand
, despite the achievement brought by
technology
, many people tend to rely on computers and become mentally incapacitated.
Consequently
, finding no need to engage their mind or improve themselves due to the input of the computers.
For instance
, the health workers at the local government have lost touch with clinical practice, as the routine of giving out computerized
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has become the norm.
As a result
, no recent discovery of epidemic cases
have
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been recorded in
this
vicinity.
Additionally
, a number of
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have lost their jobs, especially in
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where machines are capable of meeting the daily demands. Eventually rendering workers jobless. In summary, despite the benefits of computers in the occupational field, people should be admonished to be more creative and acquire more skills than
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on
technology
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inventive and creative procedures.
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