Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that painters, musicians and other innovative

artists

in general, should be sponsored by the

government

.

however

, there is another group that

believe

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other possible financial sources should be considered to support

such

artists

. I strongly agree with the former opinion. On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that

government

is responsible for protecting cultural heritage by means of supporting the arts. Artworks are tightly bonded to the culture and history of any country, whereas the

government

is the one who is responsible for keeping the culture alive for the

next

generations.

For instance

, when the

government

grant funds to a painter who is interested in illustrating historical monuments, more paintings will be drawn and

as a

result

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more people will have a chance to become familiar with their country’s historical background.

On the other hand

, another group of people claim that governments must allocate budgets to other vital areas in society. They insist financial support must be dedicated to the other critical fields that are more essential than

art

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such

as healthcare infrastructures or educational needs in deprived areas.

however

, I do not find

this

argument convincing as by sponsoring talented

artists

, there is a good chance that the

government

can

also

have financial gain eventually.

For example

, when a skilled musician is supported to have performance, the

government

can have financial gains from selling tickets as well and if needed,

such

money can be invested in other essential parts

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society. To conclude, in my view,

this

is the

government

’s duty to grant fundings to creative

artists

as arts play a key role in the protection of cultural heritage and

such

protection is the

government

’s duty.

Moreover

, the investment in more critical parts of society can be done by the benefits gained

as a result

of supporting

artists

.