Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that painters, musicians and other innovative
artists
in general, should be sponsored by the
government
.
however
, there is another group that
believe
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other possible financial sources should be considered to support
such
artists
. I strongly agree with the former opinion. On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that
government
is responsible for protecting cultural heritage by means of supporting the arts. Artworks are tightly bonded to the culture and history of any country, whereas the
government
is the one who is responsible for keeping the culture alive for the
next
generations.
For instance
, when the
government
grant funds to a painter who is interested in illustrating historical monuments, more paintings will be drawn and
as a
result
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more people will have a chance to become familiar with their country’s historical background.
On the other hand
, another group of people claim that governments must allocate budgets to other vital areas in society. They insist financial support must be dedicated to the other critical fields that are more essential than
art
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such
as healthcare infrastructures or educational needs in deprived areas.
however
, I do not find
this
argument convincing as by sponsoring talented
artists
, there is a good chance that the
government
can
also
have financial gain eventually.
For example
, when a skilled musician is supported to have performance, the
government
can have financial gains from selling tickets as well and if needed,
such
money can be invested in other essential parts
in
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society. To conclude, in my view,
this
is the
government
’s duty to grant fundings to creative
artists
as arts play a key role in the protection of cultural heritage and
such
protection is the
government
’s duty.
Moreover
, the investment in more critical parts of society can be done by the benefits gained
as a result
of supporting
artists
.
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