Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of free admission outweigh the disadvantages?

Some artistic places

such

as galleries and

museums

request a

fee

entrance

whereas others do not charge any admission

fee

. Certainly, there are positive sides as well as downsides,

however

, in my

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there are more negative developments if these

institutions

allow

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entrance

.

To begin

with, some benefits are possible to be seen once free

entrance

is permitted. One of them is that

this

trend may incentive

people

visiting

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centre more frequent. It is a way to create a more engaged population towards

artistic

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profession. In Europe,

for instance

,

people

are extremely involved with historical and traditional

museums

. It is because they learnt how to admire these

institutions

by going there.

Additionally

, more schools could take their students to

museums

and lesson them about its importance and its careers perspectives. It is

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regard that educational

institutions

ought to show to teenagers.

On the contrary

, there are evident negative developments as a consequence of

this

feeless

entrance

.

Firstly

, they disincentive good payments for artists, because their income mostly come

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museums

and galleries visits.

Therefore

, if the

entrance

is free, the artist work,

such

as paints or sculptures, are not being valued properly.

Furthermore

, every institution needs money to maintain

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infrastructure. They need to keep the

place

tidy, organised and

also

, pay their employees. It is impossible to have a well-

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culturalist

country where citizens value artists work without paying any

fee

. It is a way to educate

people

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to deliver the right value for a

place

and the other’s job. In conclusion, it is debatable whether artistic

institutions

should request an

entrance

fee

,

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because positive and negative sides have their own merits.

Although

, I defend that disadvantages outweigh the benefits. It is because nobody works for free and a

place

needs the money to maintain its infrastructure. Even though the attitude of free charge might bring a positive incentive to

people

, they will not really give the right value for the

place

nor for the work.