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these days people work in more than one job, and often change career serveal times during their life . what are the advantage and disadvantage of this?

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Nowadays, everyone wants a better lifestyle, a high salary and a lavish
life
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. Many people try discrepancy jobs or they do more than one job.
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 essay , I will discuss some of the reasons why pupils try to change their career as well as do twice or thrice jobs in a week and some of the challenges to be overcome.
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 people change their career to follow their passion. Take Bollywood's actor Sushant Singh Rajput for an example. He was pursuing his career as an engineer but he takes a chance and learnt acting and become an actor in the Bollywood industry and he did so many beautiful projects in his
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, if you follow your dreams you get fame, money, and success but more importantly you cheerful and satisfied in your
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. Turning to the other side of the argument, you feel socially isolated, to be more precise, you don't have time for your family and friends because of the back to back work and you don't have time for social gatherings.
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 you become annoying and you feel tired all the time and it affects your reclusive
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 often leads to alone and you gonna be isolated from society. All things considered, Follow your dream never easy. you need to weigh up the pros of a better lifestyle, success and so on, and the cons of live private
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, isolated from society ,Personally I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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