Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that youngsters should attend volunteer works as an

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extra curricular

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activity not only to improve themselves but

also

contribute

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to society. I strongly agree with

this

point of view, as I believe that voluntarily participate in unpaid work helps teenagers develop soft

skills

such

as communication, empathy and teamwork while supports non-profitable

organisations

need for the workforce.

First

of all, nobody can contest that gaining interpersonal

skills

not possible only depend on the education system. Some soft

skills

like working with other people, taking responsibility and collaboration are only possible learning by doing. Regarding

this

, young generations are encouraged to attend voluntarily jobs to gain these

skills

.

For example

, there are many programmes driven by non-governmental

organisations

to help people in need

such

as being a part of a team in a refugee camp or distributing foods to homeless people can contribute to youngsters mental development significantly.

Furthermore

, societies in a huge need workforce in

voluntery

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voluntary

volunteer

activities. It is a known fact that non-profitable

organisations

subsidies with a very little amount of money and

this

money have to use for

community

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the community

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who need support. Young generations can contribute

these

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activities while they are gaining real-life experience.

For instance

, by attending a volunteer children education programme in one of the

third

-world countries, teenagers can interact with underprivileged children while they are gaining an understanding of the world. Thanks to

this

experience

these

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young population not only can evolve an insight about how to change the world but

also

support the

organisations

as a labour force. In conclusion, undoubtedly unpaid works as a volunteer are significantly important not only to develop youths soft

skills

but

also

to contribute to society as well. I believe that gaining real-life experience helps to cultivate a conscious youth.