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In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? disagree?

#world #animals #food #medicine
Using
animals
 in
the
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different sources has become more common.
However
, Preservation of
animals
 must be done. I agree with
this
 statement as the animal population has been decreasing but there are some uses with
animals
 in research.
Firstly
, In
this
contemperory
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contemporary
 era, technology has been developing in everyday life.
Moreover
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 new innovations are taking place. So, usage of
animals
 can be decreased because many
animals
 are undergoing
to
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extinction. Many
animals
 are used for clothing and making different accessories
such
 as leather bags have higher demand. New methods should be developed to replace the use of animal skin.
For instance
, in recent times many studies
has
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 done to decrease the use of animal skin and
still
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 research is going on.
For example
, Recently in Singapore
first
 restaurant has developed where the
food
 developed in the lab is served as it contains
similar
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a similar
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 taste of chicken is a great innovation.
Thus
, Researches should be continued to reduce the use of
animals
. If not in the future there will be no
animals
 where
the
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environmental destruction will be
occured
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occurred
 as there
also
 a part of
this
 earth.
Furthermore
,
Many
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many
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animals
 are used as
food
 as well as in medicine.
For example
, Most of the
animals
 are used in research in which the drug or vaccine should be tried on rats in the clinical stages and
then
 it is released into the market if not
lot
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a lot
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 of human loss occurs.
Besides
this
,
animals
 are
also
 used as
a
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food
to
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 many human beings. To illustrate, Protein which is present in chicken breast and egg is 2 times more than the dals or any other
food
 items.
Therefore
,
Animals
 usage can be used in various ways but it should not
extent
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. To sum up,
Conservation
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the Conservation
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 of
animals
 is
indispensory
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dispensary
 and it is
obligation
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an obligation
the obligation
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 to our humans
alog
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along
 with
this
animals
 should be used in a particular way that should be checked.
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