In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Technology has
ability
to change everything in human life. Like electric cars, Change the article
the ability
driverless
vehicles etc. but, it has some benefits as well as losses. Although
some people
claim that driverless
vehicle
has many advantages and some want opposite of that. I think,
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apply
driverless
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the driverless
vehicle
has many disadvantages than benefits.
To begin
with, without driver
and driving people
travel
from one place to Add the particle
to travel
other
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another
its
amazing feeling. But, it is safe for Replace the word
it's
it is
human
Add an article
a human
the human
being
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beings
that is
the main question because, control speed, diversion problem
, ticket problem
, etc they can face for that also
. For instance
, sometimes some workers don’t have knowledge about that city so they exact not sure about where they have to leave bus
if Add an article
the bus
driver
is available in Add an article
the driver
a driver
bus
so he easily Add an article
the bus
a bus
talk
with him.
Change the verb form
talks
Secondly
, one
another main disadvantage for Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
who has a job as driver
so they Add an article
a driver
the driver
loose
their economy due to Replace the word
lose
driverless
vehicles. Correct your spelling
For
Fro
example, in India nearly 70 Correct your spelling
For
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
people
go anywhere by cab. So Change preposition
of people
people
do Add an article
the job
job
as cab Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
driver
they Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
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lose
loose
their job and faces Correct your spelling
lose
financial
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a financial
the financial
problem
.
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Thirdly
, driverless
vehicle
have many advantages like easy to go anywhere, government Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
dont
have to hire so many drivers for that and it is Correct your spelling
don't
good
Add an article
a good
benefit
towards Add the particle
to benefit
country
economy, to illustrate, Add an article
the country
driverless
cars does not have problem
for going for Add an article
a problem
the problem
picnic
on long distance. Rest Add an article
a picnic
problem
is not there because as as
human for Remove the redundancy
apply
long distance
driving Add a hyphen
long-distance
people
suffer
from headache, they Add the particle
to suffer
want
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won't
rest
but, due to Add the particle
to rest
driverless
car
it is easy for us.
To cite an example, old Add a comma
,car
people
above 60 year age they have a big issue for driverless
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the driverless
a driverless
vehicle
because of increasing age some people
can not able to operate technology.
Lastly
, in my opinion, “every coin has two side
” like that Change to a plural noun
sides
driverless
thinking has both likes and dislikes but, how much it is convenient for people
is most
important factor. Correct article usage
the most
Moreover
, driverless
Add an article
the driverless
vehicle
has many disadvantages than advantages and it is not helpful for all type of people
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