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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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governments believe that economic
progress
 is the only target and most crucial for a country. Some people consider that other categories of
progress
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equivalent importance as well. There are apparent reasons why economic development is often considered the primary goal of an administration.
Firstly
, it ensures better living standards for
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.
Therefore
,
this
 offers better job opportunities, education, healthcare and purchasing capabilities.
Besides
, by creating new job opportunities for citizens the problem of poverty can be ameliorated.
Furthermore
, they point out that poor education and healthcare systems can be improved by dedicating budgets for these sections.
On the other hand
, forgetting other types of
progress
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 of complications. People need to have an awareness of the following aspects
such
 as overpopulation, climate change and pollution.
For example
, Bangladesh is one of the under developing countries having these disadvantages.
In particular
, we should consider the area of criminal justice, human rights and equality.
For instance
, South East Asia countries including Pakistan, India and Bangladesh,
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 sexual abuse and harassment, and chaotic cruelties. Increasing criminal acts decreases a country’s dignity and
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overall image. In order to minimize
such
 actions, it’s up to the hands of governments to make some legal punishments. Other aspects of prosperity include garments, transportation
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, manufacture of foods and political relationships between nations. In conclusion, economic
progress
 is not a single objective that can be achieved overnight. Equal or even more important aspects are there for actual development.
As a result
,
this
 would bring sustainable financial achievement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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